This is gonna be a great resource! Love the colours. My suggestions would be to make it really clear what the book is about, if the idea is to appeal to a slightly more lay person audience. E.g. skills FOR connecting to yourself and the world, as neurobiology of connection and autonomic may be a bit niche. Similar idea for the back, to me it looks pretty wordy and the use of 3(?) different fonts across bold/italic in only slightly varied sizes feels a bit overwhelming. My eyes feel drawn everywhere and that makes it hard to figure out what the tl;dr is. Is there a way to emphasise “Build the skills and awareness to embody your best life” even more, maybe by putting it in an even bigger size or with a contrasting coloured thought bubble around it or something? Love it!!
I shouldn’t try to use a second language when I struggle with my primary one! Did not mean to offend , what I ment to convey is that , this is a brilliant idea, and I would like to purchase the workbook (s) when available… you can continue to tweak but in my opinion this is ready for use and at least from this practitioners viewpoint .. it will be a valuable and useful resource 🙏🏻👏🏻
Thanks for opportunity to comment. I think it’s a good idea however I really feel that it needs to be in simple language. My sense would be write it, simplify it and then simplify it once or twice more 🙏
yes of course this looks amazing so far. For me its usefulness depends on the type and ease of exercises that help people first discern what their state is, whether that state is useful in the moment, and then what, if anything to do about it. What I have seen so far here is great.
I love love LOVE the concepts of making the work even more accessible through use of 'lay language' and most importantly; the pragmatism of being exercise, practise-based. I love the colours, use of pictures, being paperback to be portable and wrist-friendly, the space to interact with the content; for me, this brings the author 'voice' and relationship with the reader even more to the fore. I agree with the comment below about distilling the wording on the back cover as far as can be done and highlighting what the workbook is for; what it helps us to DO/BE/BECOME/RECLAIM <3 . And yes, super interested in bulk pre-order when available please. Simply so excited and grateful.
Y, sin embargo, ¿cómo podemos poner precio a algo que está más allá del valor? ¿Y por qué convertiremos lo inefable en una transacción? La verdad es que todavía no tengo ni idea. Probablemente veintinueve dólares, supongo, ya que contiene el número nueve, que es el número de la maestría. Si pudiera cobrar un pulpo vivo por libro, lo haría.
This is gonna be a great resource! Love the colours. My suggestions would be to make it really clear what the book is about, if the idea is to appeal to a slightly more lay person audience. E.g. skills FOR connecting to yourself and the world, as neurobiology of connection and autonomic may be a bit niche. Similar idea for the back, to me it looks pretty wordy and the use of 3(?) different fonts across bold/italic in only slightly varied sizes feels a bit overwhelming. My eyes feel drawn everywhere and that makes it hard to figure out what the tl;dr is. Is there a way to emphasise “Build the skills and awareness to embody your best life” even more, maybe by putting it in an even bigger size or with a contrasting coloured thought bubble around it or something? Love it!!
Yes, also back cover needs work. Any thoughts about a better title?
Very useful feedback. Thank you!
Love it!! Can’t wait!
I shouldn’t try to use a second language when I struggle with my primary one! Did not mean to offend , what I ment to convey is that , this is a brilliant idea, and I would like to purchase the workbook (s) when available… you can continue to tweak but in my opinion this is ready for use and at least from this practitioners viewpoint .. it will be a valuable and useful resource 🙏🏻👏🏻
Thanks for opportunity to comment. I think it’s a good idea however I really feel that it needs to be in simple language. My sense would be write it, simplify it and then simplify it once or twice more 🙏
Yes, simplified even more, agreed. Working on it.
Thank you!
yes of course this looks amazing so far. For me its usefulness depends on the type and ease of exercises that help people first discern what their state is, whether that state is useful in the moment, and then what, if anything to do about it. What I have seen so far here is great.
Thank you!
I love love LOVE the concepts of making the work even more accessible through use of 'lay language' and most importantly; the pragmatism of being exercise, practise-based. I love the colours, use of pictures, being paperback to be portable and wrist-friendly, the space to interact with the content; for me, this brings the author 'voice' and relationship with the reader even more to the fore. I agree with the comment below about distilling the wording on the back cover as far as can be done and highlighting what the workbook is for; what it helps us to DO/BE/BECOME/RECLAIM <3 . And yes, super interested in bulk pre-order when available please. Simply so excited and grateful.
Yes, agreed. Back cover needs to be revised and visual design improved.
Cuanto dinero, mi Hermano?🤣🤛🏼💰
Y, sin embargo, ¿cómo podemos poner precio a algo que está más allá del valor? ¿Y por qué convertiremos lo inefable en una transacción? La verdad es que todavía no tengo ni idea. Probablemente veintinueve dólares, supongo, ya que contiene el número nueve, que es el número de la maestría. Si pudiera cobrar un pulpo vivo por libro, lo haría.
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